Rough Cut Feedback

Feedback From Our Target Audience

After looking at our video our audience said the liked the different shot types as we had mid shots and 360 shots. The shot they liked the most was the Dutch tilt as the artist performance was on point as the emotion was conveyed.
The jump cuts were very effective and the artist performance was very good.
The scene that was enjoyed by everyone was the scene at Granary Square as during the pitch everyone thought that it would be difficult to show the lights at the fountain during the evening. However we were able to shot the scene and the lighting was very clear.

Improvements

In our video some of the scenes the mise en scene is different in terms of the artists hairstyle as there is a mix of some scenes with curly hair and others with straight hair. 
More close ups are needed. 
The lip sync was slightly off and use smooth cam to smooth out the shots as some of the shots are shaky and unclear.
There are some shots were the camera is shaking which needs to be cut out before the shake in the final video.